i guess i would add an extra comment on the flashback – an obvious choice to connect to the character; he is so happy, then. It’s an easy way for author to emphasise current disaffected situation? In creative story writing, i’ve been suggesting to students that they adda flashback for precisely this reason – provide some info for audience as to why the character might be feeling the way they do now.
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Nice one. Love the detailed analysis. It is wonderful isn’t it to go to such depths in a piece.
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Thanks. It’s only notes for Q3 but interesting to see what you can pick out.
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i guess i would add an extra comment on the flashback – an obvious choice to connect to the character; he is so happy, then. It’s an easy way for author to emphasise current disaffected situation? In creative story writing, i’ve been suggesting to students that they adda flashback for precisely this reason – provide some info for audience as to why the character might be feeling the way they do now.
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